Persuasive+Speech


 * Title (1/2 mark):** Donations for Palestine
 * Specific purpose (1/2 mark):** To convince the audience that Palestine need our help
 * Central idea (1/2 mark):** I want to convince the audience that we must donate for Palestine because they lack basic needs (food and drinks, shelter), they need proper education for their future and they need medical facilities.


 * I.** **INTRODUCTION**


 * A. Attention getter (2 marks):** When the last time you donate for Palestine?One years ago or two years ago?We only remember to donate when there is seminar or talk about Palestine. But, their always need our help, everyday, every month and every year.
 * Transition to body of speech (1/2 mark): Let's begin by talking about,**


 * II.** **BODY**

1. They lack basic needs (food and drink, shelter). 2. There are more than 500 refugees that need $77,700 to complete their basic needs. 3. For foods, Palestine citizen need $311,750, so, we have excess, we could afford to share our excesses with the Palestinian people.
 * A. Main-point (1/2 mark):**
 * i. Supporting details (2 marks):**


 * Transition (1/2 mark): Moreover,**

1. They need proper education for their future. 2. It is very expensive to pay the teacher that teach children in Palestine. In this case, less teacher in their country. 3. Other than that, the materials that provide to the children also limited. They only use reuse books and papers to study.
 * B. Main-point (1/2 mark):**
 * i. Supporting details (2 marks):**


 * Transition (1/2 mark): Henceforward,**

1. They need medical facilities. 1. The lack of medical equipment and medicines in Gaza is steadily increasing. According to figures of the World Health Organization (WHO), in January 2008, 19 percent of necessary medicines were lacking, primarily those needed in surgery and in emergency cases, antibiotics for initial care of children, and cancer drugs. 2. 31 percent of vital medical equipment is lacking too. There is also a grave shortage of replacement parts for equipment and of disposable items, such as bandages, syringes, and plaster for casts.
 * C. Main-point (1/2 mark):**
 * i. Supporting details (2 marks):**


 * Transition to conclusion (1/2 mark): Therefore,**


 * III.** **CONCLUSION**


 * A. Summary of main points (1 mark): Today, I have explained why we need to donate for Palestine. It is because they lack basic needs (foods and drinks, shelter), they need proper education for their future and they need medical facilities.**
 * B. Memorable final statement/Call for action (1 mark): Just imagine that your condition now in Palestine, of course you don't want it happened, so, start donate from today, they are waiting for our help and concern.**


 * REFERENCES**


 * http://www.map-uk.org/regions/opt/projects/view/-/id/77/**
 * http://www.amanpalestin.net/english/borang/profil_ringkas_ap.pdf**
 * http://www.unesco.org/education/news_en/131101_palestine.shtml **